What do you think?

I’ve had well meaning people advice me on what my blog needs to improve on. Some weren’t too nice though. Those of you who blog or write as a hobby will understand the whole idea behind this, but for posterity’s sake, i suppose some changes do need to be made so please, be my guest. How do you think we can improve? Take note, this blog is personal not professional or profit-oriented, plus, I already know i should not abbreviate. So legoooo. Be nice🙈🙈🙈